Sunday, May 27, 2012

Dilemma--Peek into Soft Sounds of Pleasure #sixsunday






I'm almost to the end of Dan and Cynda's story, meaning I'm at the point where I want to kill them both for being wayward characters who keep wandering off-task...a frustration every writer feels at some point, yet a huge no-no in a romance. So, I decided to give them a rest and show you a peek into the beginning of Colton's love affair. You remember Colton, right? He's the brother who suggested last week that Dan burn down the farmhouse to get rid of the gremlins hiding large black dildos in the kitchen drawers. His and Lila's love story, Soft Sounds of Pleasure, is only a couple of weeks from being released. Let's take a peek:


He was almost to the back door when he stopped dead in his tracks. His conscience began screaming for him to turn around. Shrieking at him, in fact, to get the hell off this deck and go back to his truck.



But his legs were suddenly as rigid as his dick.
He could hear the thousand tiny devils begin sharpening their blades.
Because his abruptly short-circuited brain was sending the message to his already-primed cock that Lila Walker was lying in the sun on her very private deck, wearing nothing but an over-sized pair of sunglasses and a coat of coconut-scented oil.

Poor Colton. What's a man to do when he sees his favorite fantasy-fuck so exposed? Will he walk off that deck? Or will he take advantage of the situation? 
Thanks for dropping in, and don't forget to check out the six sentences from the 184 other writers participating in Six Sentence Sunday this week.



9 comments :

  1. I thoroughly enjoyed this Eden!! He hesitated, there is no way off the deck for him now, right, fingers crossed :D

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    1. I think my kids would say, 'That boy's a goner'. Thanks for dropping in, S.J. :-)

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  2. I am so hoping he will take advantage. I love your 6 Eden and this 6 is no exception!

    Nikki

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  3. Perfect six for this beautiful weather we are having in the UK! Loved it!

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    1. No bragging allowed, it's already to hot to breathe outdoors here, but thank you :-)

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  4. Great six Eden!

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  5. Wow! He's certainly got a tough decision to make! Fun six! DaraAmes.blogspot.com

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